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The silence rings around this room
Like a bell that is always rung
A deathly silent screeching
Its voice is always sung

The darkness stings your eyes
And will not leave you to your peace
Like a robe of shadows around your head
Will the darkness never cease?

The smell of burning perceivers
Slipping inside of thee
Infesting your bones and flesh
With flames you’ll never see.

An icy cold upon your skin
Filling you with dread
The chill runs down your flesh
Soon you’ll end up dead.

Taste the nothing in your mouth
The emptiness that lied
Relish the taste of numbness
And that feeling deep inside

Feel the pain of nothing
When there is nought left to see
Suffer with this existence
For this what’s to be.

When you are locked up
Down in the depths of hell
This existence will drive you mad
In the darkness where you dwell

So live your pitiful life
To the best of what you can
For when you pass the darkest point
This is what is planned
©2007-2009 ~Ultimate-Destroyer
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Author's Comments

Not my best poem, but i'm getting better, I was slightly bored while waiting for Timer to get out of his exam.

The poem is about the senses, and the feeling of a person that is doomed to dwell in hell.... how he will be tortured to the Nth degree, not in body, but in mind...

it's a little less gory than my usual poems, hope you enjoy

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Very nice one. Well written. I liked it. You've set a good mood. It feels dark and hopeless...

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im impressed you could think of this many rhymes lol id run out like halfway :)

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I have a pretty wide vocabulary.... but when i cant think i cheat.... [link] rhymezone

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